{"id":157,"date":"2008-05-23T22:53:35","date_gmt":"2008-05-23T10:53:35","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/2008\/05\/23\/break-it-down\/"},"modified":"2016-01-09T19:26:20","modified_gmt":"2016-01-09T06:26:20","slug":"break-it-down","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/break-it-down\/","title":{"rendered":"Break It Down"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Whenever I drag myself out for a run, the Dog usually accompanies me. Taking the Dog means having her on the lead, factoring in stops for toileting and meeting other dogs, and waiting for traffic. When it&#8217;s a hard run, I welcome each and every excuse to stop. But when it&#8217;s a run where I&#8217;m in the zone and I do not want to stop, I grit my teeth and wait on the bitch as she wees and poos and smells other dogs&#8217; bottoms.<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes things have to happen in their own way, no matter how much I want to beat my last time.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve been gritting my teeth a bit with the <a href=\"http:\/\/nzwg.org.nz\/forum\/index.php\/topic,17.msg84.html\" target=\"_blank\">television pilot<\/a> lately. I&#8217;ve written a couple of pilots before but those were for half-hour shows; this puppy&#8217;s an hour-long drama.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve read a heap of hour-long pilots*. I&#8217;ve got <a href=\"http:\/\/www.jillgolick.com\" target=\"_blank\">Jill Golick<\/a>, <a href=\"http:\/\/www.johnaugust.com\" target=\"_blank\">John August<\/a>, <a href=\"http:\/\/kfmonkey.blogspot.com\" target=\"_blank\">John Rogers<\/a>, and <a href=\"http:\/\/www.lisaklink.com\" target=\"_blank\">Lisa Klink<\/a> on my RSS feeds. I&#8217;ve been perusing my <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/The_West_Wing\" target=\"_blank\">West Wing<\/a>, <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/The_Shield\" target=\"_blank\">Shield<\/a>, <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Law_&amp;_Order\" target=\"_blank\">Law &amp; Order<\/a> and <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Sports_Night\" target=\"_blank\">Sports Night<\/a> DVDs. (Yes, <i>Sports Night<\/i> is half-hourly <i>but it&#8217;s so freakin&#8217; good!<\/i>)<\/p>\n<p>Unlike a feature script where I can leap in &#8211; within reason and\/or time constraints &#8211; keyboard blazing tight groups of sluglines and cut-to&#8217;s, a television script is much more rigidly structured. For starters, there are ad breaks to take into account. And there&#8217;s the (currently imaginary) budget to consider &#8211; no CUT-TO&#8217;s to the Iraq occupation or Victorian London for this show. And I have to establish some sort of feel or style or look &#8211; or <b>all<\/b> of those preceding words &#8211; to reinforce the show and concept as being unique and individual.<\/p>\n<p>Right now, feature scripts are looking easy-peasy: I only need to keep the audience nailed to their seats for ninety-plus minutes and then they&#8217;re free to go.<\/p>\n<p>The pilot has forty-five or so minutes with which to engage\/enthrall\/hook\/addict the viewer <b>and<\/b> make them look forward to next week&#8217;s episode.<\/p>\n<p>I can <i><b>see<\/b><\/i> the ep doing that &#8211; but only in my mind&#8217;s eye. In order to get it Out There, I have to write it all up &#8211; and to do <i>that<\/i>, I have to break down the ep:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><i>thumbnails:<\/i> intro the team; establish their work;<\/li>\n<li><i>synopsis:<\/i> meet the team; they save the world; it&#8217;s all in a day&#8217;s work;<\/li>\n<li><i>breakdown:<\/i> the TEAM LEADER is about to retire; his NEMESIS breaks out of maximum security prison; the game is afoot!<\/li>\n<li><i>character descriptions:<\/i> the Team Leader is square-jawed but has an in-grown toenail; his Nemesis looks pudgy but is all muscle, baby!; they have a <i>history<\/i>&#8230;.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Long-<span style=\"text-decoration: line-through;\">suffering<\/span>-time readers will know how much <a href=\"http:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/2007\/06\/05\/short-and-sweet\/\">summarising<\/a> Turns. Me. On.<\/p>\n<p>Having written many, <i>many<\/i> pages of notes like &#8220;HERO&#8217;s only childhood memory is of when his mother dressed he and his dog, Bingo, in matching sailor suits&#8221; and &#8220;NEMESIS destroys SIDEKICK in best-of-three pinochle&#8221;, I must confess: I&#8217;m beginning to see the attraction of index cards.<\/p>\n<p>They just seem so&#8230; unromantic.<\/p>\n<p><small>*\u00a0 Big ups to <b>Mr Lee<\/b> for his stash.<\/small><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Whenever I drag myself out for a run, the Dog usually accompanies me. Taking the Dog means having her on the lead, factoring in stops for toileting and meeting other dogs, and waiting for traffic. When it&#8217;s a hard run, I welcome each and every excuse to stop. But when it&#8217;s a run where I&#8217;m &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/break-it-down\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Break It Down&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_exactmetrics_skip_tracking":false,"_exactmetrics_sitenote_active":false,"_exactmetrics_sitenote_note":"","_exactmetrics_sitenote_category":0,"advanced_seo_description":"","jetpack_seo_html_title":"","jetpack_seo_noindex":false,"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","_links_to":"","_links_to_target":""},"categories":[4,6],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-157","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-scriptwriting","category-television"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack-related-posts":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/157","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=157"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/157\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":4320,"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/157\/revisions\/4320"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=157"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=157"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/dfmamea.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=157"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}